this is my friends for life writting

this is my friendship never dies writting

 

 

There was a man with a monkey. They were stranded on an island waiting for a helicopter to pass by the man and the monkey were thirsty, tired and hungry.the wind was strong and blowing on the light leaves the leaves were swaying side to side. They were so thirsty that their lips were about to cut. The man was just happy he would not die alone. He was going to get food and a source of water but he had no energy to do it. He knew that there was no hope time was flashing every second the man was anxious just like the monkey. But then they heard a animal in the bush it was a snake it charge he flinched the most in his life but then a helicopter shot the snake out and threw down a huge ladder the monkey climbed up to the man said thank you to the monkey and the pilot.

 

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my cat man writting.

After Work

my cat man writing is really descriptive and i put lots of efort into itmy cat man writing is about cats standing up for there rights and there idle is cat man, cat man in this story stopped a robberybut also helped it.

Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1

(describe your character)

1:00pm a man wearing cat ears with a cape named cat man.
Sentence 2

(describe the scene)

Cat man was walking on a path next to cars on a street. 
Sentence 3

(Conflict – what is the problem?)

There was a car ready for a bank robbery and cat man knew he had to do something.
Sentence 4

(Conflict – how does your character feel?)

The robbery was about to start and the masked people were making their move, cat man felt confident.
Sentence 5

(resolution – how is the problem solved?)

The robbers were running to the bank with their duffel bag but cat man flew his cat claw and it grabbed all of them.
Sentence 6

(how characters have changed)

The robbers knew not to mess with cat man.

 

Follow up activity

 

Describe in detail the quest or challenge the hero is facing. 

Challenge – Use this sentence in your writing Ring ring…Ring ring…Ring ring… There was a call from the phonebox on the corner…   

There was a man wearing black with cat ears his name was CAT MAN cat man was 4.5 metresa long and he has a high pitch voice he has also got a 2 pac. Cat man also had a theme song danananananana Cat man meow meow meow cat man fights crime and saves people but cat man did not come here for no reason he came here to stop a bank robbery but he also wanted to have money then suddenly ten masked men go to grab there duffle bag and ran to the bank. Cat man got his cat  claw and grabbed then and he said whats the code for the vault and they told him it and then cat man said meow then he got  the money then he lived happily ever after.

 

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