this is my friendship never dies writting
There was a man with a monkey. They were stranded on an island waiting for a helicopter to pass by the man and the monkey were thirsty, tired and hungry.the wind was strong and blowing on the light leaves the leaves were swaying side to side. They were so thirsty that their lips were about to cut. The man was just happy he would not die alone. He was going to get food and a source of water but he had no energy to do it. He knew that there was no hope time was flashing every second the man was anxious just like the monkey. But then they heard a animal in the bush it was a snake it charge he flinched the most in his life but then a helicopter shot the snake out and threw down a huge ladder the monkey climbed up to the man said thank you to the monkey and the pilot.
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Sal
Kia ora Sal,
I like your writing but maybe next time read it aloud before you publish to make sure it makes sense. I remember doing this writing too! What is your favourite sentence in this writing?
Blog ya later,
Tulsi
thank you for you positive feed back i will check it.
Sal
bye